31.7.11

Down Stream

Soles
pressing twigs into sighing dust
pressing
forward to the river

No longer do dreams stay
still
I love like water


Posted by wanderer above the mist at 31.7.11
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8 comments:

  1. ClaudiaJuly 31, 2011 at 3:02 PM

    hmmm i agree - dreams are best when they're moving.. i like the urge and passion in this

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  2. s.c. kaliskiJuly 31, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    "I love like water"
    Beautiful

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  3. ScarletJuly 31, 2011 at 4:11 PM

    I like that line too...."I love like water"

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  4. Tom EliotJuly 31, 2011 at 4:46 PM

    A barefoot meditation
    "Ilove like water" made me hold my breath

    Simply passionate

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  5. SheilaJuly 31, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    sounds like a worthwhile walk. I enjoyed this, thanks, Kelly.

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  6. Brian MillerJuly 31, 2011 at 7:16 PM

    that last line is hot...ha. nice sucinct pen...i like

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  7. MartinAugust 4, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    This is great. The art of condensing words to the essence.

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  8. wanderer above the mistAugust 4, 2011 at 11:36 PM

    Thank you :)

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