4.5.11

One Shot Wednesday: Bait


Bait

I walked through the forest
as wind insufflated the trees. 
Their cries, though deafening, were mere whisperings to me.
I look at the ground counting stones and broken twigs.
I look for your crown, among the devil's figs. 
Why insist on sleeping when you know night's dark fate? 
Your empty mind is nothing now. 
Just the devil's bait.

By Kelly P


7 comments:

  1. Kelly thanks so for sharing
    has that dark fantasy edge

    glad to meet you on Twitter

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  2. I like your poems dark edge and hints of forthcoming doom. Very "nice" Kelly!

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  3. love the natural edge, i often go to the forest to empty my mind, and yes nature abhors a vacuum...easy bait for the devil...

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  4. Very creative and inspiring. Loved the phrasings.

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  5. This leaves me wanting the rest of the story, perfect.

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  6. Love your poems!You re very talented!xoxo

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