25.2.11

The Woman

Sloped down, bent backwards
Circling air again
Stooped on porches not yours
Those faded lime green socks scream

6 comments:

  1. stooped on porches is nice word play...having a hard time putting the image together but each line really is nice...

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  2. great last line, very well crafted word play indeed.

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  3. I agree with Brian, love the word play

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  4. i like that - stooped on porches not yours...great line..it has the quality of an wake up call...and then the line green socks, screaming...wow...kudos...a fine haiku

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  5. those socks - brilliant - what a great line

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  6. With few words, you've written a unique piece. Enjoyed it :)

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