10.7.11

Street to Freedom

You're bleeding
out of each pore
rushing
against time

Pause and carry your pail
to the well of
dreams
your heart is running dry

Flowing along to life's trap
of course you cannot see
inside the struggling vein
is a person, almost free

5 comments:

  1. Great tone of optimism in the speaker's effort to discover freedom after a heart bled dry. Excellent response to the prompt.

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  2. freedom comes at a cost...just hope it is not the heart...nice write...

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  3. Really nice flow and rhyme to this piece, much enjoyed ~ Rose

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  4. Love this... the flow is magnificent. powerful words, Flowing along to life's trap
    of course you cannot see
    inside the struggling vein
    is a person, almost free

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