Great tone of optimism in the speaker's effort to discover freedom after a heart bled dry. Excellent response to the prompt.
freedom comes at a cost...just hope it is not the heart...nice write...
Really nice flow and rhyme to this piece, much enjoyed ~ Rose
Love this... the flow is magnificent. powerful words, Flowing along to life's trapof course you cannot seeinside the struggling veinis a person, almost free
Free..are we ever?walk the past