19.7.11

Fleeing Frenzy

Even the birds seem
contused

Drifting on wind gusts
grasping to holds in the currents
barely breathing as air forces her way
inside

And each cloud
suffused
with vile clutter
barely hold a color
hardly hold the rain

Twisting knots from branches
trees shake their heads
as birds pass by
pleading

6 comments:

  1. Love the images

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  2. wow..somewhat dark images...or tense at least...but nicely spun

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  3. Hell of a storm... great imagery ... i feel the wind blowing my soaked clothes

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  4. Fantastic imagery, but those poor birds!

    Nice one!

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  5. I love the 3rd stanza..it's making me wait for something...lol great job! :)

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  6. Love those pleading birds! Nice one, Kelly!

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