4.6.11

Cinquain Poetry

Style one:

Ruined
you sit
looking at ashes
wishing only to finally
fly

Style two: 

Ashes
voiceless brown
gagging, begging, mirroring
ashes to ashes
dust

Style three:

Sifting
waiting for dusk
watching ashes blow south
wondering why we came to this
dying

4 comments:

  1. i like all three of them kelly but my fav is no. 1..maybe because of the flying..

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  2. I kept trying to pick a favorite and changed my mind a couple of times, but I think number one is my favorite, too. Starting with the word "ruined" was a great choice :)

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  3. i think the three play well together to paint a well rounded picture so i would keep them all...smiles.

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  4. sombre piece here.. i like all of them ~

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