Even the birds seem
contused
Drifting on wind gusts
grasping to holds in the currents
barely breathing as air forces her way
inside
And each cloud
suffused
with vile clutter
barely hold a color
hardly hold the rain
Twisting knots from branches
trees shake their heads
as birds pass by
pleading
Love the images
ReplyDeletewow..somewhat dark images...or tense at least...but nicely spun
ReplyDeleteHell of a storm... great imagery ... i feel the wind blowing my soaked clothes
ReplyDeleteFantastic imagery, but those poor birds!
ReplyDeleteNice one!
I love the 3rd stanza..it's making me wait for something...lol great job! :)
ReplyDeleteLove those pleading birds! Nice one, Kelly!
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