14.11.11

soul searching

Shattering mist
we call to each other
hands scrape around bark
bruised knuckles ache against wind

crunching earth
as we run to each other
from each other
trapping yesterday under forever
freeing tomorrow to flirt with endlessness

hoping somewhere beneath each breath
life can continue on

7 comments:

  1. This is a nice read. Love the flow and the style.
    Keep up the great work!

    http://thepoetrydiner.blogspot.com/

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  2. I was going to pick out some favorite lines, but there are too many :) Great images, of scraped knuckles and yesterday being trapped under forever. Very nice.

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  3. trapping yesterday under forever
    freeing tomorrow to flirt with endlessness

    two awesome lines...i feel the hope in the running to but also the fear in how long it can last...and i am glad in spite of that you embrace the risk

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  4. The Noiseless CuckooclovkDecember 1, 2011 at 9:28 AM

    this is ever moving and fanscinating!

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  5. Enjoyed reading this poem. Keep shining and writing for all the world to see.http://thepoetrydiner.blogspot.com/

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