6.11.11

weary waters in blue

drenched
the wind thrashes against glass and doorframes
droning on through waves of chaos
winding wind chimes around broken chords
then crashing down into puddles
rippling blue through trapped brown

daybreak

the souls in puddles hum against bee flutters
grasp crevices of passing tires
reflect sky into grass into--sky

the soul in each puddle
twirls leaves like dancing ladies
left foot over right
twirling autumn red with wind

Simple meditation
finding truth in utter stillness
waiting past each brink and shudder
each night
each frosty cover

souls never caring
too weary to dance away

only rippling to whispers
again

Posted by wanderer above the mist at 6.11.11

6 comments:

  1. Jenne' R. Andrews November 6, 2011 at 1:34 PM

    Evocative and beautiful, Kelly-- I especially liked:

    the souls in puddles hum against bee flutters
    grasp crevices of passing tires
    reflect sky into grass into--sky

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  2. Brian MillerNovember 6, 2011 at 1:52 PM

    nice...some nice allusions to colors in this ... and a wide array of textures as well...deep spirituality in this as well...

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  3. ClaudiaNovember 6, 2011 at 1:56 PM

    great imagery in here kelly..much enjoyed..and agree with bri on the wide array of textures..a well crafted pieces

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  4. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryNovember 7, 2011 at 9:16 AM

    wearing waters in blue,
    your title is cool.

    stunning imagery, rippling to whispers is a vibrant line.

    :)

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  5. VictoriaNovember 7, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    This allowed me to peek in on the scene as you show it. Very effective, stunning descriptions, achieved with the help of color.

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  6. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonDecember 1, 2011 at 2:16 PM

    beautiful writing.



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