Come ride the train with me
all we need is a notebook
all we need is us
Trees bend backward
Shake and laugh off snow
The wind strips all of secrets
There is nothing left to know
Such benthic daydreams
braid colors in my hair
Lean back, face the window, face life with a dare
Me, with my camera
photographing the air
I would enjoy this ride very much! Love the braid colors in my hair line, such depth in that simple thought. Great One Shot!
ReplyDeleteI too loved the braid colors in my hair line as well as the shake and laugh off snow line. It gives me a clear visual of the scene. Thanks for sharing your One Shot
ReplyDeleteL Turner
ah, great visuals...i grew up by the train tracks and actually jumped the train once...enjoy the random things you chose to highlight and you blended it well...
ReplyDeleteThere's a feeling of carefreeness in this poem. My fav line is "Lean back, face the window, face life with a dare".
ReplyDeleteNice One Shot!